in some countries more and more shops are open long hours every day. what are the positive and negative developments of this
Nowadays, there are increasing numbers of shops which open for more hours a day.
This
leads to a recent argument by members of the community who wonder the impacts of it. Hence
, to settle the dispute, a further
discussion will be given below.
To begin
with, there may be security issues if shops open for longer period
of Suggestion
a longer period
longer periods
time
. What I mean by this
is, crime rates at night are relatively higher in most places, as a result
, robberies are more likely to occur. Consequently
, lost and injuries will happen in this
incident. This
is evident by the data which are released by French Police, stating that the possibility of stores to get rob
at night are over 50%. Needless to say, opening for more hours at night, it may harm the store financially and the people inside physically.
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robbed
On the other hand
, every mater owns it
benefits and drawbacks. Even though of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"
its
crimes
tend to occur, employees will have more Suggestion
the crimes
time
for shopping and store
will earn more profits. Suggestion
the store
This
may happen since in most nations shops close at 17:30 while office workers get off work at 17.00, causing them to have inadequate time
of purchasing groceries and other household goods. By having longer store’s operational
hours, people are able to shop Suggestion
operating
more daily
needs. Suggestion
most daily
Subsequently
, as people purchases
more items, the profit generated by stores will surge. Suggestion
purchase
This
is proven by annual financial reports of Indonesia’s leading supermarkets in which those who open for longer time
generates more income.
To conclude, after having some points above, although
opening for longer hours may lead to higher chances of robberies, the advantages from other
perspective outweigh the disadvantages. any of various alternatives; some other
another
This
is because of more clients are able to go for shopping which eventually contributes to a higher income.Submitted by melvern.elva on
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