Some people think that there should be strict laws to control the amount of noise a person makes because of the disturbance it causes to people. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

The high volume is the most seen
issue
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issues
in our modern
life
. No one likes too much sound,
also
, it is a reason for debate.
Thus
,
this
issue must be protected by strict laws.
First
of all, the different locations lead
on
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to
various problem
such
as rural
life
and urban
life
. The
legistation
law enacted by a legislative body
legislation
of rules ought to cover all
lifestyle
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lifestyles
and areas. The
argue
force or impel in an indicated direction
urge
is to be strong
law
polices or not. Cause, it has
directly effect
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a direct effect
direct effect
on people liberty, which including advantages and disadvantages. A glance at the advantages shows that all
location
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locations
would be achieved serenity city
life
or rural if the
law
was applied
strict
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strictly
.
Moreover
, the noise pollution
can be reduce
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can be reduced
in big cities with these laws.
Thus
, there has effect on human
pychological
mental or emotional as opposed to physical in nature
psychological
behiavor
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
with
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by
in
reducing population stress. The strong
law
policies help to prevent
huge population
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the huge population
to the infringing of
law
.
Also
,
it protects to citizen
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it protects the citizen
it protects to the citizen
against debating between citizen.
For instance
, in rural
life
, the people choose flats for housing, which they establish more closely with each other. The sound spread fast and easy between the walls.
Thus
, neighbour can be
fight
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fought
fighting
about
high volume issue
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the high volume issue
high volume issues
.
On the other hand
, it seems least disadvantages that the strong
law
policies confine human
individiual
a human being
individual
individuals
freedom.
For instance
,
first
problem shows that people
can not
can not
cannot
do anything in their social
life
, because, the person
always remember
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always remembers
which breaking the
law
.
Therefore
, people restrict their social activities.
Second
is that the
law
set for urban
life
. It does not include rural
life
cycle, because, the rural
life
is not so much active as than urban too.
For instance
, the rural
life
does not encompass too much traffic voice, horn or rush people. In short,
Although
the enacted strict
law
has effect on
diffrent
unlike in nature or quality or form or degree
different
side of human
life
, the advantages more comprehensive than disadvantages.
Thus
, the strong
legistation
law enacted by a legislative body
legislation
can only way to prevent voice pollution.
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