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some people think that children should be given lesson of how to manage money in the school? do you agree or disagree?

#people #children #lesson #money #school
In
this
 expensive world
,
Accept space
,
 people are
become
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becoming
 more
consious
intentionally conceived
conscious
 about
money
 and their expenses.
parents
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Parents
 want that their children should learn how to spend
money
 in their childhood from the school so that they may have
better
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a better future
future
. I personally agree with
this
 statement
becuase
for the reason that; on account of
because
 it is essential for every person to learn about
money
 management.
Money
 is
depressable
 factor for surviving. In the world of
deigitalization
conversion of analog information into digital information
digitization
, youth become spending more
money
 in showing
themseleves
reflexive form of "them"
themselves
 best in front of society. They are so
counsious
intentionally conceived
conscious
 about their looks and lifestyle. They
wants
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want
 to live a lavish lifestyle in compare to others.
children
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Children
 have
influnced
a power to affect persons or events especially power based on prestige etc
influenced
 by
addvertising
a public promotion of some product or service
advertising
 and spending
huge amount
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huge amounts
a huge amount
 of
money
 in buying video games, clothes
,
Accept space
,
 food and digital toys.
these
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These
 are the factors that
affacting
arousing affect
affecting
budget
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the budget
 of an individual family.
parents
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Parents
 who
can not
can not
cannot
 afford those expenses are getting tired to
fuillfill
put in effect
fulfil
fulfilled
 their child needs.
children
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Children
does not like
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do not like
 to
listen
perceive (sound) via the auditory sense
hear
 their parents
thats
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that's
 why
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
 believe that our education system should teach them how to manage
money
 and its importance. In other
side the
Accept comma addition
side, then
side then
 its a
responsibilty
the social force that binds you to the courses of action demanded by that force
responsibility
 of parents that they should
taken
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take
 care of their child's expenses.
they
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They
 should refuse to do spend
money
 on
unneccesory
not necessary
unnecessary
 things.
they
Suggestion
They
 should teach
to them how to
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them how to
 save
money
 for
future
 use and how to invest it for getting high profit so the children have
safe
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a safe future
future
. To conclude, its not only the
responsbility
the social force that binds you to the courses of action demanded by that force
responsibility
responsibilities
 of
education system but
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the education system, but
the education system but
also
 of parents.
youth
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Youth
 is
future
 of society and nation.
they
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They
 must have to concern by their own.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • financial education
  • value of money
  • budgeting
  • saving
  • financial goals
  • planning
  • curriculum
  • responsible spending habits
  • debt prevention
  • parental responsibility
  • educational requirements
  • commercial interests
  • mathematics integration
  • social studies
  • bridging the gap
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