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In some countries, young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this.

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Taking a year break before higher
education
 is common in some countries. Working and travelling aid in personality development.
However
, it is the reason many youngster encounter difficulties
to
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in
 re-adapt academic
environment
. In my opinion,
this
 trend could have both advantages and disadvantages in equal measure.
the
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The
 greatest benefit of a gap for
year
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a year
the year
years
 is, as it helps in positive personality development. Travelling broadens the views, youngsters learn new social attitudes.
In addition
, working before university
education
 leads to
development
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the development
 of
proffesional attitude
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professional attitudes
professional attitude
a professional attitude
.
Consequently
, work experience
make
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makes
 them
profecient
having or showing knowledge and skill and aptitude
proficient
 and skillfull. To illustrate, my cousin
,
Accept space
,
 who travelled to England after finishing high school
,
Accept space
,
 learned how to survive in
new
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the new environment
a new environment
new environments
environment
, linguistic and cultural challenges made him grow as a person
.
Accept space
.
As a result
, he comfortably adapted to
new
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the new environment
a new environment
environment
 of international university later on.
the
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The
 main challenges students will face after working before higher
education
 is to re-adaptation to
university
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the university environment
a university environment
environment
. Many people continue to work and never return to universities, as it is difficult for them to start
study
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studying
 again. As an illustration, my brother started a job in call
center
an area that is approximately central within some larger region
centre
, earned
agood
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a good
 amount of money and became independent. He never returned to
studies
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study
, because in that case, he had to depend on finances
sponsered
assume sponsorship of
sponsored
 by parents, ultimately, affecting his freedom. To conclude, It is nowadays incredibly common to take a year gap after high school. The advantages and disadvantages of working and travelling before higher
education
 are equal in terms of their effect on youngsters.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Cultural immersion
  • Life experience
  • Work ethic
  • Career readiness
  • Self-discovery
  • Delayed gratification
  • Intellectual stagnation
  • Financial implications
  • Social dynamics
  • Academic trajectory
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