a person's worth nowadays seems to be judged according to social and material possessions. old- fashioned values, such as honour, kindness and trust, no longer seem important to what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion

Todays modern lifestyle a lot of people cared more about material possessions and their status in society.
Values
Suggestion
The values
of the old are often taken for granted,
such
as, chivalry, goodness and trust. In my opinion, old
valies
beliefs of a person or social group in which they have an emotional investment (either for or against something)
values
are still very important, most especially in
this
cotemporary
characteristic of the present
contemporary
times. These values
is
Suggestion
are
the core foundation of being a person and
thus
it is always best to continue to uphold these virtues. It is very common nowadays to think
highky
to a high degree or extent; favorably or with much respect
highly
of those people who have great wealth and who are
i
of me or myself
my
I
top ladder of the society.
Thesepeople
Suggestion
These people
are being praised, not because of their good traits, but, because of their looks, authority and their material possessions. People look up to some politicians, and even voted for them,
eventhough
Suggestion
even though
it is known that these politicians are corrupt. People voted for them not because of their good
character but
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character, but
because of their power and money.
Furthermore
, we often think highly for those people who owned
luxurious
Suggestion
luxury
items,
such
as, hermes,
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as Hermes,
as, Hermes,
as, hermes',
as, Hermes',
prada
Suggestion
Prada
parade
and others as classy and elegant. Yet we really do not know their true attitude and character. In my opinion, it is still best to judge a person's worth based on their characters, and not on their earthly possessions and power. Old values are vital, it makes a person humbled, respected and makes the world a better place. Someone's worth should not be measured based on her or his appearance.
we
Suggestion
We
have seen a lot of rich and famous people lost their respect because they simply lack the human values. When one has integrity, people will respect and treat him or her better. When
majority
Suggestion
the majority
a majority
of the people care about values, the world is much safer; people will be more concern and sensitive towards other people's needs.
in
Suggestion
In
my opinion, old-fashioned values are still and most important. It is a must that these values should be taught and continue to cultivate ourselves and the
next
generations to come.
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