Violence in society increases when more violence is shown on television. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Violence
is one of the problematic issues faced by the society today and the government of most countries try
to take measures in order to avoid any Suggestion
tries
violence
from taking place. Media plays a very important role in situations of violence
. I will discuss about how television
or media influences people during such
circumstances.
Earlier, people used to get information
about what is happening around the world only through newspapers. So they would get only those information
which gets published in the newspaper; moreover
, it was a controlled media. Newspaper companies were not allowed to publish all the information
, especially sensitive matters that would create violence
and harm the integrity of a nation. But now there is no control on what is getting published on television news channel
. Media houses telecasts sensitive matters live which creates more problems to the security of a nation. Suggestion
a television news channel
Police
and the army find it difficult to handle Suggestion
The police
such
situations as all the information
gets leaked. For example
, 2011 Mumbai terror attacks were shown live on all news channels which made it easier for terror groups to get information
about all the moves made by the police and the army; alerting the terrorist about the developments.
Furthermore
, when violence
in the society is shown
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shows
in
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on
television
it has a negative impact on the minds of people. If new channels show live telecast about a violence
, youth get influenced and try to get involved. Suggestion
violent
For example
, when there was violence
in UP after meat ban, all news channels showed this
on TV and there were debates during prime time. This
influenced youth from many other states and it created a major divide among communities.
In conclusion, I totally agree that showing more about violence
in television
increases violence
and divide in the society. Although
, I agree that media houses cannot stop from broadcasting the news about violence
, but they can always be selective what is shown on television
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