Your child is going on a trip to a nature reserve organised by a local youth club. The club leader is looking for parents to travel with the group and you would like to go. Write a letter to the leader of the youth club. In your letter say why you want to go on the trip describe what you could do to help during the trip ask for more details about the trip. Write at least 150 words You do NOT need to write any addresses Begin your letter as follows

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Dear sir/madam I am writing to express my interest in accompanying the group on the upcoming
trip
to the nature reserve. I understand you are looking for parent volunteers, and I would be thrilled to join and assist in any way I can. I have always had a passion for the outdoors.
This
trip
will be a fantastic learning experience for the children, allowing them to connect with nature and appreciate wildlife.
Additionally
, being there will provide my child and others with comfort and familiarity, making the
trip
even more enjoyable. As a parent volunteer, I am more than willing to help supervise the children, organize activities, and ensure everyone stays safe and follows the reserve’s guidelines. I am
also
happy to help with necessary preparations,
such
as packing or arranging meals. Could you please provide me with more details about the
trip
, including the exact dates, the itinerary, and any specific responsibilities expected of parent volunteers? I would
also
appreciate information on any equipment or resources I should bring. Thank you for considering my application. I look forward to the possibility of contributing to a memorable experience for the children. Warm regards, Jaskaran Singh
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task achievement
Include specific details or anecdotes to strengthen the personal connection.
coherence cohesion
Ensure all questions asked are direct and concise, possibly numbering them if there are many.
task achievement
The letter clearly expresses interest and motivation to join the trip.
coherence cohesion
Organized logically with distinct paragraphs for each main point.
greeting and closing
Closing of the letter is polite and expresses eagerness to participate.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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