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University education should be free to everyone regardless of income. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#university #education #income
Education, is the bedrock of any society. It is, a necessary foundation, in which, everyone, should be, a partaker of, regardless of status, or wealth. It should not, be regarded as, a privilege, whereby, only the rich, are entitled to, but, should be seen, as a pillar, for the future, of our young ones. In my opinion, to be educated, should be, the basic right, of every person, in the face of the earth. A strong, powerful, and developed
country
, is so
thus
,
as a result
 of, the impact, of knowledge, that it has impacted, on its citizens, which in turn, now reflects, as a positive, and United nation, as well as, a United society, to be,
reconed
expect, believe, or suppose
reckoned
 with all over the world. Typical examples, of
developed
Suggestion
developing
 nations, are, the United States of America, the United kingdom, the people's republic of China, as well as, the Russian federation. The United States of America, more often than not, invites, and sponsors, people who, have a promising future, to come, and study in their tertiary institution, which, ultimately results in, the
retainance
an excited state of a stable particle causing a sharp maximum in the probability of absorption of electromagnetic radiation
resonance
radiance
 of
such
 persons, towards, the growth and development, of the
country
. Educational foundation, should not, be the only vision, the government should have, for its people. Citizens, of every
country
, should
afforded
Suggestion
afford
 the
previlege
a special advantage or immunity or benefit not enjoyed by all
privilege
privileges
, to
further
 pursue, their area of interest, as
this
, will be, beneficial to all, in the long run. To conclude, I would, agree with the notion, that says, that university education should be free to everyone, regardless, of income. Tertiary education, and all the knowledge,
it
of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"
its
 impacts, will be, harvested by the
country
 in the future. A structure, should be, put in place, to enable every person, get a post secondary education.
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