Some people think that the government is wasting money on the arts and that this money could be better spent elsewhere. To what extent do you agree with this view?

Recent articles and debates have been questioning if the

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should keep investing as much as it currently does in arts and

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. It's the

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understanding that current

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expenditure in

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are exagerated

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is exaggerated

are exaggerated

and could be better spent

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in or to another place

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essay will present arguments to support

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position and hopefully help the

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rethink its position. Brazil has more than 40% of its population with no access to drinkable water nor basic sanitation.

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problem alone poses the highest health threat to low income families, killing hundreds of infants every year from diseases like malaria, cholera and yellow fever. It is my understanding that

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public health issue demands more funds from the

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and part of it could come from decreasing arts expenses.

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Therefore it

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Therefore, it

would be recommended that

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transfers partially or totally its arts and

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funds

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for

basic sanitation projects.

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, new NGOs like Arts4All are growing and showing highly professional work in giving access to cultural presentations like paintings, sculptures and concerts to less fortunate families. Arts4All alone has promoted more expositions

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year (350) than all top-5 public museums together. So it is arguable that NGOs can do a better job in promoting

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and arts to the public than the

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,

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another motive for public money to be spent elsewhere. Summarising, public opinion has become more and more critical on how and where governments spend public money, being arts a recurrently questioned topic. It is the understanding of the author that

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the Brazilian government

government

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should cut back on arts and

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funds and relocate them into more critical issues like basic sanitation, classroom education and homeland security. That would lead to a better use of tax money and higher value

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of

the population,

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to a distinctly greater extent or degree than is common

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those that need it the most, low income families.