Some people think that managerial posts in private companies and in government are more suitable for men. Others think that given the opportunity women can be successful managers. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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These days, males and females are working parallel,

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earlier, it was assumed that men have to lead, but nowadays, the trend has changed, and it has become a debatable question whether men are better managers

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essay, both aspects will be discussed and a plausible conclusion will be extracted. While comparing genders for a managerial role, women's capability to organise everything can not be overlooked, they are specifically famous to be more particular about the minor detailing, aesthetic sense, presentation and accomplishing tasks before time even. Research shows that the presence of a female manager makes the office environment more formal, reliable and task achievable, not only they know the art to entangle customers but

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employees.

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, we find most of the organizations keep male supervisors as others believe that they keep a broader view of the market yet more approachable at any time, including; weekends and midnight.

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, frequent travelling out of station or late sittings to make a deal is comparatively more feasible to them as they are not considered to be mainly responsible for home chores.

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; a male boss can stay in office as long as

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, In most of the

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, people feel more comfortable in the presence of a male, they feel free and be real, while it is nearly impossible in the presence of the opposite gender.

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, one can smoke, use inappropriate words or slangs or even share a drink with male bosses but it is nearly impossible with female supervisors.

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, a level of discomfort rises and leads to dissatisfaction and failures. To sum up, people are divided and have diversified opinions, while I believe, having a male boss is far better in comparison, as

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he has a wider

market exposure and more time to dedicate to the serving organization.

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, one should have a leading role of men in order to bring more successes.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.5

Complete response

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Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

5 paragraphs

332 words

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Some people think that managerial posts in private companies and in government are more suitable for men. Others think that given the opportunity women can be successful managers. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Fully explain your ideas

in many countries, people live longer and longer. Does this development have more advantages or disadvantages?

It is important that people should be encouraged to get married before they are 30, as this is the best both for the individual and for society. Do you agree or disagree?

You recently bought a piece of equipment for your kitchen but it didn't work. You phoned the shop but no action was taken. Write a letter to the manager in your letter. Describe the problem with the equipment. Explain what happened when you called the shop. say what you would like the manger to do