Boxing is a blood sport which often results in physical injury. It is inappropriate for this sport to exist in the modern age. Do you agree or disagree?

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It is argued by some people that due to the frequent cases of bodily

injury

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from boxing, it should be

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banned

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modern era. I disagree with

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view because some non combative sports do cause similar injuries and there are measures put in place to protect boxers from

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. One significant reason for the support of boxing today is owning to the fact that some other common sports often result in similar injuries.

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, sports

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as football, car racing and baseball inflict people with life-threatening wounds or have caused the death of some sport personalities.

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, in 2014, a popular young footballer in Nigeria, sustained a ruptured spleen while playing football and

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lead to his death.

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, it would not be just to restrict boxing when other sports result in physical

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as well.

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, organisers of boxing matches do provide protective standards for the participants.

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is geared towards reducing or preventing injuries during the course of a fight.

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, amateur boxers wear protective head

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gear

in Olympic boxing matches while

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the referees

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authorised

to stop a bloody fight and declare a winner before a knock out. These precautionary measures have helped to reduce the frequency and the severity of injuries. In conclusion,

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boxers often sustain physical

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during fights, boxing should not be

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banned

due to the fact that some other non combative sports cause similar injuries and protective measures are often ensured during fights. More people

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should enlighten

about these reasons.

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