Write a letter to a friend who is coming to stay at your apartment while you are away on vacation. In your letter, •Tell him/ her about your flat. •Give him/ her some instructions about his/ her stay. •Tell him/ her what to do in case of problem.

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Dear Mary, I hope

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letter finds you well. I'm excited that you will be staying at my house for two weeks so to make your stay more enjoyable, I'm going to give you some information about my apartment. My apartment has three bedrooms and two bathrooms. One of which is a

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bedroom with its own bathroom and a walk-in wardrobe. My house

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have

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a spacious kitchen where you can cook all your favourite foods. You will

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love

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part of the house as I know that you enjoy cooking. There are some instructions regarding your stay.

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, you can invite a small group of people to the apartment but strictly no parties.

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, drinking is prohibited

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walking in the corridors as

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is a shared space.

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, feel free to make yourself at home. If you encounter an issue, you know how to contact me by Instagram or

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. I hope you'll enjoy your stay and see you in two weeks. Best wishes, Joscelin

Submitted by joscelinching on Thu Jan 09 2025

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Task Achievement

Although the explanations and instructions are clear, you may want to include more specific details about what Mary should do in case of certain types of problems (e.g., technical issues, medical emergencies).

Coherence and Cohesion

Make sure each paragraph focuses on a distinct idea to improve clarity, though the current structure is already strong.

Coherence and Cohesion

The letter effectively greets and closes in a friendly and personal manner, which is suitable for the intended audience.

Task Achievement

The writing tone is appropriately informal and friendly for a letter to a friend, making it suitable for the task.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

169 words

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Write a letter to a friend who is coming to stay at your apartment while you are away on vacation. In your letter, •Tell him/ her about your flat. •Give him/ her some instructions about his/ her stay. •Tell him/ her what to do in case of problem.

Many people feel it is a waste of money to try to save endangered animal species, for example the tiger or the blue whale. To what extent do you agree or disagree whit this statement?

Nowadays many people complain that they have difficulties getting sleep. What problems can lack of sleep cause? What can be done about lack of sleep?

Some people believe that having a pet helps old people in living a more healthier and enjoyable life. In what ways do old people benefit from having a pet? Do you think there are any problem associated with old people having pet?