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People say that reading for pleasure helps people to develop imagination and better language skills than watch TV. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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It is widely believed that having an interest on books exerts much greater impact on boosting imaginary mind and gaining better
language
 ability than glancing at programs on
television
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Television
. In my opinion, I completely agree with
this
 view thanks to the
enourmous
extraordinarily large in size or extent or amount or power or degree
enormous
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 benefits we can reap.
Firstly
, a reader can possess not only extensive
knowlege but
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knowledge, but
knowledge but
also
 creativity.
In stead
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Instead
 of including illustration or vivid images which watchers have an idea of the characters or happening things, most written materials have a range of structures and abstract, thereby forcing people to pick up their brain with a view to figuring out situations
narruted
provide commentary for a film, for example
narrated
 if they keep up with
splot
an active diversion requiring physical exertion and competition
sport
.
As a result
, they are likely to enhance their
creativy
having the ability or power to create
creative
 thought which animated video fails to bring.
Secondly
,
Accept space
,
people having a passion for books are likely to gain a deeper understanding on the skill of
language
. Unlike video which
utulize
put into service; make work or employ for a particular purpose or for its inherent or natural purpose
utilize
utilizes
 a majority of spoken words, written sources
such
 as literature provide a formal word and require readers to pay much attention to analyse their underlying meanings, improving their writing skills and better master
language
. Expressing their thoughts and emotions in much wiser and more logical format is
as a result
 of applying knowledge from
book
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books
the book
a book
. My friend, a bookworm,
for example
, have ability to show her thought much better than the others in my class. In conclusion, reading a book plays
an
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a
 vital role
on
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in
 shaping
creativy
having the ability or power to create
creative
 and possessing better
language
 skills.
Therefore
, it is highly recommended that each individual should form a habit of reading on their daily basis.
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