Countries around the world will be facing significant challenges relating not only to the environment, but population and education as well. What problems will your country face in the next ten years? How can these problems be overcome?

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Environmental,
population
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and
education
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systems are changing rapidly around the world. These changes pose significant challenges to countries around the
world especially
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world, especially
in my
country
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, India.
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and how these can be overcome. One of the most crucial problems my
country
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faces is its high growth rate of
population
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. India has over 1 billion people already with limited
resources making
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resources, making
it difficult to
fulfill
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even the basic needs of its populace.
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adversely
effects
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the environment as the natural resources are used up at a faster rate which has already started creating deficit for the same. Deforestation is rampant in order to expand the
cities causing
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cities, causing
rain and water shortage. As, agriculture is negatively affected due to
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, people in villages are moving to cities,
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creating a vicious circle of
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resource depletion. In the
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ten years the
country
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’s main focus needs to be reducing its
population
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.
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the government should do by creating policies that encourage fewer children like
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tax benefits for people with two and less kids.
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India produces some of the greatest minds in engineering and medicine, the poor in my
country
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have none or very limited access to basic
education
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. In the
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ten years, unless and until the public school system improves, the
country
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will continue to face challenges in terms of the large gap between the classes and
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the masses
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the government should have stringent rules pertaining to cost of private
education
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which is becoming unattainable to the middle class mostly due to greed. In conclusion, India as a
country
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should focus mainly on reducing its
population
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and creating better
education
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systems for the same.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Sustainability
  • Ecosystem
  • Renewable resources
  • Urbanization
  • Demographics
  • Healthcare system
  • Pension crisis
  • Curriculum development
  • Digital literacy
  • E-learning platforms
  • Lifelong learning
  • Public policy
  • Biodiversity conservation
  • Green technology
  • Population density
  • Generational equity
  • Economic disparity
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