Most people accept that we now live in a globalized world but not everyone agrees that this is beneficial. To what extent is globalization a positive or negative development?

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Globalization is everywhere now and so, while some people approve of
this
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, there are others who do not accept that it would be a benefit.
While
(often used as a combining form) in a good or proper or satisfactory manner or to a high standard ('good' is a nonstandard dialectal variant for 'well')
Well
,
thiscould
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this could
have a variety of positive developments, it does have some negative developments that need to be considered.
Firstly
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, globalization
has lead
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has led
to many futuristic developments and has a great impact on society.
Furthurmore
in addition
Furthermore
, it had
lead
Suggestion
led
to an increase in free trade and communication with other nations and
thus
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, have improved technology, education, health care and consumer goods worldwide. An example
include
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is included
, one of the most
deliscious
greatly pleasing or entertaining
delicious
product
Suggestion
products
that have been enjoyed in
every where
to or in any or all places
everywhere
, Nutella, which gets
it's
of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"
its
ingredients from several countries.
On the other hand
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, globalization
had
Accept comma addition
had, consequently
consequently
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, lead to cultural
homogenicity
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, which unfortunately made the unique cultures and languages of each distinct country extinct.
For instance
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, Srilanka has many languages with the most prominent being Sinhalese and Tamil but there is a risk of more people speaking English and other languages in the future due to many of them study or work abroad. Another drawback is that,
this
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development
has
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has also led
also
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lead to certain environmental issues.
In other words
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, the increased consumption of products could cause increased production, which in turn puts stress on the environment. As follows, transportation of raw materials to other countries require a lot of fuel, which could contribute to an increase in pollution levels. In conclusion, globalization has improved technology, education and consumer goods worldwide,
nonetheless
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, it could lead to cultural
homogenicity
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and many stressful environmental problems due to increased production and consumption.
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