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Most people accept that we now live in a globalized world but not everyone agrees that this is beneficial. To what extent is globalization a positive or negative development?

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Globalization is everywhere now and so, while some people approve of
this
, there are others who do not accept that it would be a benefit.
While
(often used as a combining form) in a good or proper or satisfactory manner or to a high standard ('good' is a nonstandard dialectal variant for 'well')
Well
,
thiscould
Suggestion
this could
 have a variety of positive developments, it does have some negative developments that need to be considered.
Firstly
, globalization
has lead
Suggestion
has led
 to many futuristic developments and has a great impact on society.
Furthurmore
in addition
Furthermore
, it had
lead
Suggestion
led
 to an increase in free trade and communication with other nations and
thus
, have improved technology, education, health care and consumer goods worldwide. An example
include
Suggestion
is included
, one of the most
deliscious
greatly pleasing or entertaining
delicious
product
Suggestion
products
 that have been enjoyed in
every where
to or in any or all places
everywhere
, Nutella, which gets
it's
of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"
its
 ingredients from several countries.
On the other hand
, globalization
had
Accept comma addition
had, consequently
consequently
, lead to cultural
homogenicity
, which unfortunately made the unique cultures and languages of each distinct country extinct.
For instance
, Srilanka has many languages with the most prominent being Sinhalese and Tamil but there is a risk of more people speaking English and other languages in the future due to many of them study or work abroad. Another drawback is that,
this
 development
has
Suggestion
has also led
also
 lead to certain environmental issues.
In other words
, the increased consumption of products could cause increased production, which in turn puts stress on the environment. As follows, transportation of raw materials to other countries require a lot of fuel, which could contribute to an increase in pollution levels. In conclusion, globalization has improved technology, education and consumer goods worldwide,
nonetheless
, it could lead to cultural
homogenicity
 and many stressful environmental problems due to increased production and consumption.
Submitted by Rashini Dahanayake on

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