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Some believe museums should entertain people, while others believe their purpose is to educate.

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Museums play important roles in today’s society. With regard to
this
, there is an often debated topic on what purpose museums should serve. While some believe that they should serve as amusement
centers
an area that is approximately central within some larger region
centres
, others hold the view that their primary aim should be to educate. Both sides of the argument will be discussed in
this
 essay before a conclusion is reached. On the one hand, a growing number of people believe that museums should be strictly for entertainment because the government generates substantial revenue from them. They claim that people get attracted from all over the world just to watch ancient exhibitions and get good value for money. A prime example is Egypt. Her national
museum which
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museum, which
 houses
artifacts
a man-made object taken as a whole
artefacts
 and ancient paintings attract tourists from different parts of the world. In the same vein, a recent report by
Africa
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African
 Union revealed that a significant twenty percent of their revenue is generated from
this
.
In addition
,
this
 fund could be used to establish other amusement
centers
an area that is approximately central within some larger region
centres
.
On the other hand
, some argue that the best purpose of museums is to educate.
This
 is because they say museums contain relics and kinds of literature on the historical background of a nation and that it is the ideal place to learn and appreciate their heritage. If every student from elementary to the tertiary level of education visited the museum, the knowledge
imparted can
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imparted, can
 birth fierce patriotism which is a very relevant attitude
for
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to
 national development.
For instance
, every Russian is taught to visit the museum from their early cognitive stage of development and
this
 could explain the strong passion they have for their country. It is
thus
 understandable why many people support
this
 view After examining both sides of the argument, it is true that museums are a good platform for entertainment.
Nonetheless
, I believe that their role in education is more impactful to society.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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