More and more people are becoming seriously overweight. Some people say that raising the price of fast food will solve this problem. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Morbid obesity is a growing concern in many western countries. Several solutions,

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raising the price of unhealthy foods have been proposed over the

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decade in order to fight

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pandemic.

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it is a good idea, I do not think increasing the costs of fast

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should be the sole answer to

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growing problem. Increasing the price on meals rich with saturated fats and carbohydrates may prevent people from eating them on a regular

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consume other, more healthy foods. As an example, adults who like to eat hamburgers

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Burger King will not buy it if it is

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making one at home. By doing so, they will learn to make hamburgers from

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products and as a consequence, eat a better meal.

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themselves, many people will learn to widen their daily intake and start eating other types of foods. Despite the above mentioned, I do not think a single action

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as increasing

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prices will fully solve the obesity problem. The main reason for

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because unhealthy

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is similar in many ways to addictive drugs and, regardless of the price, people will continue to consume it when possible. To support

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claim, a recently published article by Harvard University has performed MRI on people after eating fast

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and shown that dishes with a high

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intake cause the increased brain activities as drugs.

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a nationwide educational

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a combination

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will teach people how to eat better foods. In conclusion, increasing the financial burden to prevent consumption of unhealthy foods should be a part of a wider, more educating program and not the only

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