Nowadays people waste a lot of food that was bought from shops and restaurants. Why do you think people waste food? What can be done to reduce the amount of food they throw away?

It is
undianble
not possible to deny
undeniable
fact that people do not understand the value of
food
. They purchase
food
from restaurants and throw it away. The reasons behind
this
is that, people have a lot of choices and
few
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the few times
few times
a few times
time
they buy it without thinking about quantity. There could be done a plenty of things to drop the proportion of waste
food
. The primary reason is that the take away
food
is few
time
spicier
Suggestion
spiciest
so they are helpless, they have to throw it.
Secondly
,
food
bought by restaurants is unhealthy, people do not know what are the ingredients in it. It is
also
oily and becomes
posion
any substance that causes injury or illness or death of a living organism
poison
passion
if we conserve it for
long
Suggestion
a long time
time
.
Thirdly
, it is easy to throw
food
and buy new one because at the present
time we
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time, we
have plenty of choices and the
food
prices are reasonable.
In addition
, people follow their taste and do not give importance to
food but
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food, but
they do not know the value of it
,
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,
half population of the planet Earth
die
Suggestion
dies
due to
this
reason. In the past, it was given
importance but
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importance, but
nowadays, it has lost that value.
Last
but not the least, they buy more than they need. There could be done ample of things to overcome
this
problem
such
as to spread the awareness among citizens in
this
way, they will think thousand times before dumping the
food
. A
second
possible solution could be to introduce laws regarding it. The prices of take away
food
should be increased. The quality of take away
food
should be improved and
food
points should use
heathy
having or indicating good health in body or mind; free from infirmity or disease
healthy
heavy
ingredients. To conclude, I strongly believe that problem of dump
food
is the serious threat. It has a lot of reasons why people dump
food
and there could be done many things to reduce the amount of waste
food
.
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