You recently attended a conference and you would like to give a presentation about the information you gained by attending the conference. Write a letter to your manager asking for permission to give a presentation. In your letter: describe what type of presentation you have in mind what topics it would cover and how long it would take who should participate in the presentation and where should it be conducted

Dear Manager, I am John. I work in the core team managed by you. Recently I was appointed to attend a conference on behalf of the company and was asked to present information after attending the conference. I need your permission to host
this
event because of its importance in building modern applications. åThe topic for
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modern databases
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as SQL and NoSQL along with some pictures and statistics to corroborate. The presentation
also
covers the advantages and disadvantages along with examples and different use cases to solve a particular problem. It will take 2 hours from start to finish with a short 15 minutes break, and at the end followed by Question & Answers. Information presented will help everyone in the organization to gain knowledge of modern technology. Mostly it will help teams working in
this
particular field and
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. Interested people can
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attend as it enhances team technology stack to fasten up the tasks and reduce the overall cost of developing and maintaining. Could you please arrange the conference hall for the upcoming week
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I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours Sincerely, John
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