Tourism is encouraged in many countries. Does tourism bring more advantage or disadvantage to a country

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Tourism
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has a pivotal role in enhancing the money
upliftment
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of a nation. That's why nations promote
tourism
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.
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discucess
to consider or examine in speech or writing
discusses
discuss
both the pros and cons Some of the
benifts
financial assistance in time of need
benefits
of
tourism
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that is
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agood
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a good
source of income. Through
tourism
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people from different countries invest in the native
country thereby
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country, thereby
increasing the gross national product.
Such
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as, buying handmade items, staying in
highclass
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high class
hotels.
In addition
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,
tourism
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provide
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provides
plethora
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a plethora
of job
oppertunities
a possibility due to a favorable combination of circumstances
opportunities
for the native.
For instance
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, in a
tourist
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hub numerous shops,
hottels
a building where travelers can pay for lodging and meals and other services
hotels
, massing
center
an area that is approximately central within some larger region
centre
Center
and there were
lot
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lots
of people working for a daily wage or monthly wage
salery
something that remunerates
salary
systems.
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,
tourism
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is a better way to learn our culture, tradition and history
for
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of
an international person.
On the other hand
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,
tourism
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has some negative phases. Some of the
tourist
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places are eco-friendly and there is specious
organisum
a living thing that has (or can develop) the ability to act or function independently
organism
organisms
. If there is a chance for pollution in that
areas
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area
by plastic bottles and plastic bags. According to a survey conducted by a newspaper a famous
tourist
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hubs
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hub
surrounding was polluted by plastic materials.
Furthermore
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, there
is
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are
some
saftey
the state of being certain that adverse effects will not be caused by some agent under defined conditions
safety
issues for the
tourister
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Tourister
. In some places
locall
relating to or applicable to or concerned with the administration of a city or town or district rather than a larger area
local
people in that area are
cheat
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cheating
cheated
or theft the
tourister
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Tourister
tourists
.
For example
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,
few months
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a few months
before a
tourist
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lady was cruelly raped in a major
tourist
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beach. It was a sensational news in that country.
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Finally police
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Finally, police
arrest three native
younsters
a young person of either sex
youngsters
in that area.
Likewise
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, some
tourist
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places are historical buildings. Some
tourister
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Tourister
tourists
missusing
apply to a wrong thing or person; apply badly or incorrectly
misusing
miss using
missing
that places by dirty
habbit
an established custom
habits
like they wrote their names on the walls, draw pictures on the wall. A case in point Tajmahall one of the main
tourist
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place in the world now government repaint that building In conclusion,
tourism
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is a good source of income as well as an acclamation of culture, tradition and history.
However
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, it has some issues in
saftey
the state of being certain that adverse effects will not be caused by some agent under defined conditions
safety
and pollution
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • economic stimulus
  • cultural enrichment
  • sustainable tourism
  • ecotourism
  • heritage conservation
  • social fabric
  • commercialization
  • economic vulnerability
  • seasonal workforce
  • infrastructure funding
  • global interconnectedness
  • environmental degradation
  • cultural commodification
  • conservation efforts
  • tourist influx
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