You want to sell your television. You think a friend of yours might like to buy it from you. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: 1)Explain why you are selling the television. 2)Describe the television. 3)Suggest a date when your friend can come and see it. Write at least 150 words.

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Dear Folake, How are you doing? I'
m
writing to ask if you would be interested in buying my
television
. It's indeed been a long time we spoke my friend! I'
m
planning to sell the
television
because
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recently bought a new one.
As a result
,
i
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now have two televisions in my home which
i
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don't have a need for.
Therefore
,
i
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thought of offering the older
television
to someone dear to me for sale. The
television
is 32 inches and a Samsung product, it was produced in 2018 and still has a warranty period of three (3) months. It's still functional and I've enjoyed watching our
favorite
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TV show (Betty in New York) on it since
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bought it. I would appreciate
if
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you can come to my apartment on
Sunday
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July 28th to see the
television
. In fact, it's
also
the weekend of my wedding anniversary and would love
if
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you
also
join the planned party while you inspect the
television
. I'
m
looking forward to seeing you,
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believe you will love the
television
I'
m
offering. Best wishes, Aisha.
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