In some areas in the US,a curfew is imposed,in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult. What is your opinion on this?
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accompanied by an adult.In my opinionthe state or fact of existing
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is a good development that will protect the country’s teenagers against dangers at night
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many teenagers are always endangered moving around between 10pm and 5amAccept space
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They are harassedAccept space
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beaten and robbed by hoodlums in those areas.Accept space
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I remember when I was youngAccept space
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my mum does not allow me to go out after 7pmAccept space
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I really do not know the reason for Accept space
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this
action at that time but
as I was growing upAccept comma addition
time, but
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I now know that Accept space
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this
was because of the increase of hoodlums in the society. It is therefore
important that they are accompanied by their parents or guardians when they are going out at night
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Another point to consider is the increase in the number of teenager
being kidnapped in some areas of the United States.It has been recorded that’s about 70,000 children’s were kidnapped in Alabama Suggestion
teenagers
last
year and the state of Alabama has warned parents and guardians not to allow their kids to go out alone at night
especially between 10pm and 5am.For example
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a friend of mind was kidnapped back Accept space
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then
in 1998 when he was sent to get some drugs at the pharmacy for his parents,
he was released after they got Accept space
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from his parents.My parents had since stopped all of us from going out at Suggestion
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into consideration.
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I think it’s a good decision to impose curfew in some areas in Accept space
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a good development for Adult to accompany them even if they want to go out at Suggestion
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