You have decided to resign from your work in order to try a new field.

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Dear Mr Harvad James, My name is Henry Johnson and I am working as a customer support agent in your company. I am writing

this

letter to inform you that I have decided to resign from the job. As, I have planned to try for a job in

medical field

Suggestion

the medical field

. I have a university degree in pharmacy so I thought to try my luck in to

pharmaceutical sector

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the pharmaceutical sector

. It has

also

been my dream to work in

this

field.

Although

, I have learnt many things from

this

job like, effective

team work

cooperative work done by a team (especially when it is effective)

teamwork

and punctuality, good communication skills and gained knowledge on different aspects of life. I am feeling saddened about leaving your company as I have worked here for about 3 years. I would like to request you for a reference which I could show in the organization I join in the future. I request you to relieve me from your service and provide me with a reference letter. Yours sincerely, Henry Johnson.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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You have decided to resign from your work in order to try a new field.

Fully explain your ideas

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Some people think that success in life comes from hard work and determination, while others think that there are more important factors, such as money and appearance. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Some people enjoy change and they look forward to new experiences. Other like their lives to stay the same and they do not change their usual habits. Compare these two approaches to life and explain your perferance.

some believe that role of the parents is more important than school when teaching their children to recycle waste to preserve the Earth’s natural resources. . to what extend do you agree or disagree?