An increasing number of professionals, such as doctors and teachers, are leaving their own poorer countries to work in developed countries. What problems does this cause? What solutions can you suggest to deal with this situation?

Migration has seen an upward trend in

past few years

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the past few years

. Professionals like Engineers, Doctors & Teachers are relocating to developed countries.

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essay points out the various adverse effects of these and what could be done to counter

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ill-effects.

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of the major

reason

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reasons

why educated youth emigrate from their home

country

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is lack of jobs,

under pay

pay too little

underpay

and infrastructure. Sometime the cost of living is a reason for moving.

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research claims that amongst all the respondents about 67% of potential migrants believe they deserve a better standard of living.

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Interestingly, low

civic sense

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of

neighbourhood

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drives people to escape to developed countries.

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of the predominant

problem

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problems

faced by the home

country

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is

economic drain

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an economic drain

as the number of

tax-payers

someone who pays taxes

taxpayers

are reducing

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is reduced

is reducing

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it is improving the lives of the family that moves out. The other effect of

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exodus is that the citizen of the

country

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who welcome migrants erratically feel that outsiders are eating up their share of earning opportunity.

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of the plausible ways to counter is by making basic amenities as semi-government. In

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way the pay and framework both can be improved. The government should make developments and increase the earning opportunities people

leaving

the experience of being alive; the course of human events and activities

living

in tier II & III cities which would balance out the economic slowdown due to semi-privatization of medical, education sectors. To add to

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, the government should ease the norms to let unorganized markets become organized.

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move would increase the

economy which

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economy, which

can be diverted to building better infrastructure for schools, hospitals and public transport. To

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conclude, if

a

country

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manages to increase the government’s revenue it will indirectly bring down the number of migrants as all the money will be channelled to the overall development of basic infrastructure.