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Today most people get married in their thirties rather than when they are young is this a negative development.

#people #thirties #development
More than age time in history, getting married and starting parental
life
 in
thirties
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the thirties
 has become a common Trend.
However
,
this
 ongoing trend has
effected
acted upon; influenced
affected
 the lives of people in both favourable and adverse manner. Negative and positive effects of starting married and parental journey in early and late thirties is discussed in ensuring paragraphs before reaching to
valid conclusion
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a valid conclusion
valid conclusions
. On
brighter side
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the brighter side
a brighter side
, adults in their thirties are generally
more professionally
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more professional
 and financially sound. Financial stability
,
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,
 if not a major
factor but
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factor, but
 is certainly one of the most important
factor
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factors
 for happy married
life
. Statistics
says
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say
 that, majority of divorce cases filed are
result
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the result
a result
 of financial conflicts between partners.
In addition
 to
this
, it is only with the adulthood people develops basic traits of patience
,
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,
 empathy caring nature which
are
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is
 requirements a good and responsible parent.
This
 is often found that
,
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,
tricenarian
 and quadragenarian are believed to more long lasting relations as spouse and guardians
.
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.
Hence
, marrying at mid thirties has its own benefits.
In contrast
, planning nuptial and children in 30 something faces many biological
issues scientific
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issues, scientific
 study states that the children wearing abilities of both male and female
reduces
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reduce
 with age. Miscarriages and children with inborn diseases are few common outcomes of late marriages.
Moreover
, the generation gap which is the root cause of major conflicts between parents and children; emerging due changes in cultural
,
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,
technological and thought process over
years
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the years
 is quite common in late marriages.
Therefore
,
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,
planning marital
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planning, marital
life
 in
later stages
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the later stages
 of
life
 has long lasting adverse effects for
tricenarians
. In conclusion,
although
 financial differences and mutual conflicts get resolved late
marriages
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marriage
 time biological all Maternity issues with offspring due to generation gaps may arise in late
wed lock
the state of being a married couple voluntarily joined for life (or until divorce)
wedlock
 scenarios.
,
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,
positive approach and mutual understanding all aforementioned issues can be controlled
.
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.
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