Nowdays, some parents pressure their children to be successful. What are the reasons of this? is this a positive or a negative development?

Every parent

want

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wants

their

child

to

secceed

attain success or reach a desired goal

succeed

in

life

and become the best he can.

Although

we wish the best for

child

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a child

children

the child

, we can sometimes exert too much

pressure

which can be harmful and lead to the opposite result. There are several reasons why we

pressure

our children.

First

, as adults we are more aware of the required steps in order to succeed in

life

. As an example, we know that studying physics will assist our children substantially more than studying music. As a

consequence we

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consequence, we

pressure

our children to study what we think they need in order to manage in

life

, rather than what they find interesting.

Second

, many parents want their children to succeed where they have failed. To illustrate, parents who did not get accepted to the university will push their

child

to have good grades so that he will graduate the university.

Third

, many believe it is harder today to succeed than in previous years.

This

is

especialy

to a distinctly greater extent or degree than is common

especially

trues

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true

in

competative

involving competition or competitiveness

competitive

prefessions

the body of people in a learned occupation

professions

,

such

as medicine, computers or

the the

definite article

the

academy.

As a result

, parent

pressure

their

childre

a young person of either sex

children

child

to get

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get

better grades, in

comparisson

the act of examining resemblances

comparison

to what they did, so that they will have a secure job later in

life

. Pressuring our children, in my opinion, is a negative development that will, in most cases, do more harm than good.

This

is because

i

refers to the speaker or writer

I

believe a

child

should find its own path in

life

and should not be directed according to

hes

male possessive pronoun

his

parents

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parents'

wishes. The consequences of pressuring a teenager has been shown in a large study done

in

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at

Harvard

University which

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University, which

showed a 30% higher

incedence

the relative frequency of occurrence of something

incidence

of substance abuse and depression among these children.

This

research illustrates the possible unwanted results of pressuring our

child

and show that we should direct our

child

and not push him. In conclusion, our children need

guidence

something that provides direction or advice as to a decision or course of action

guidance

and direction.

This

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This, however

however

, should be done gently or else it might lead to unwanted results.