The average standard of people health is likely to be lower in the future than it now.What extend do you agree or disagree?
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world
life
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the life
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this
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the inventions
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equipment
types of equipment
pieces of equipment
significa
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significant
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since
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assistance
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consequently
general health
of the public continues to improve chances c survillance
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surveillance
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days society
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every government in this
world is putting a huge amount of investment on public health
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establishing new infrastracture
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infrastructure
out break
.Correct your spelling
outbreak
moreover
preventive programes
including immunization and vaccination which are really effective to reduce Correct your spelling
programmes
programs
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number
finally
a joint effort from world nations also
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health
.supporting countries each other from producing medicines to fighting against communicable diseases to financial suppoters to poor countries Above all
preparing every human to handle health
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a group of researchers always working on Add a comma
this,
modify
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opinions
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future
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health
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