Some teachers think that international student exchange would be beneficial for all teenage school students. Do you think its advantages will outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Recently, there have been some kind of ways to help
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students
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open eyes widely to see what the outside world looks like. From that experience, those Linking Words
students
will need to adapt and interact with a perfectly new culture which helps them to be independent on their own which is one of the factors needed in each person. Use synonyms
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, after the first month was quite rough, she was gradually getting over it, and becoming quite grown up after all, from a crying girl, she now has turned into a mature girl who can deal with a lot of problems on her own.
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, there are still some drawbacks to Linking Words
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are familiar with living close to family, so living far away from their parents sounds really difficult. Use synonyms
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, when starting to live in a new environment, there are so many things to adapt Linking Words
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as foods, drinks, or culture, which may take Linking Words
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to deal with, especially since these will be fundamental keys to help them mature and become an independent person.
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gradually they have a chance to know about what the outside world looks like and learn how to become independent from their family which may outweigh the problems Linking Words
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as being lonely, finding hard to live far away from their home. these drawbacks will be tackled soon on their own.Linking Words
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