should wealthy nations be rquired to share their wealth among poorer nations by providing such things as food and education ? or is it the responsibility of the goverment of poorer nations to look after thei citizens themselves.

The whole essence of humanity is basically not only to live and

die but

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die, but

to ensure that meaningful impact is made in the lives of people. Some are of the opinion that

goverments

the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit

governments

of poorer nations have the sole responsibility to cater for her own people. I strongly believe that wealthy nations should give

helping hands

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a helping hand

helping hand

to poorer societies. On the one hand,

it

it is

it's

commonly believed that individual nations are sovereign in nature.

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to say, they are old and strong enough to stay on their own without external influences. Since these nations can make laws for themselves, it is

also

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of necessity that they should be able to effectively provide for the needs of their citizens without entirely depending on aids or grants from wealthy nations. North

Korea

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Korea, for

for

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example was

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example, was

able to move from a

third

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world

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nation to have a seat among the committee of

wealthy nation

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wealthy nations

a wealthy nation

within a decade without any assistance from rich societies.

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, proving to all that the main purpose of

goverment

the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit

government

is not only to legislation but

welfare

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the welfare

of its citizens.

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,

i

refers to the speaker or writer

I

do not believe that the aforementioned

arguement

a fact or assertion offered as evidence that something is true

argument

stands up to scrutiny.

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, sharing wealth with poorer nations strengthens brotherhood.

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,

this

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does not only create and invisible

bond but

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bond, but

also

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shoe an expression of love and compassion which is lacking in the

world

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today.

In

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addition

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addition, this

this

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act would definitely encourage other wealthier nation to do the same for poorer

nations particularly

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nations, particularly

in areas of severe need, both human and capital. The scourge of HIV and AIDS had

reduce

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reduced

gradually from 38% in 1994 to about 31% in 2015 due to the grants received from the Unites State of America and other donor agencies.

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,

this

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had reduced the incidence and

prevelance

the quality of prevailing generally; being widespread

prevalence

of the disease in the region. To conclude, caring for the

need

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needy

neediest

of poorer countries should be seen and an important responsibility.

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, turning a blind eye to these

need

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needs

would not only make the

world

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an unsettled

habitation but

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habitation, but

a

world

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of hatred and anarchy looking for the slightest

oppurtunity

a possibility due to a favorable combination of circumstances

opportunity

to explode.