Popular events like the football World Cup and other international sporting occasions are essential in easing international tensions and releasing patriotic emotions in a safe way. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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Nowadays, football is the most popular game in the world. We can find there are many different teams who plays
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football. There are dividing into 3
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:
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one
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,
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two
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and
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three. Each divisions have different skills. The skills that they have are depend on the manager. He is the
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who teachs the player how to play. By playing football, there are many advantages and
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.
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, the team can earn a
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of money. If we compare the income in
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one
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and
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two
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are really different. The
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one
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will get more than
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two
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. Because as we know, the team in
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one
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, they shows to the people that they are able to play better than the others.
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: David Beckham (the player of Manchaster United). He can earn for about £45.000 £50.000/week. It’s unbelievable. Even the prime minister in the UK just got for about £11O.OOO/
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.
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, they can get a
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of spectators which makes the income increased. In
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match, they can earn for about 20 or 30 million pounds. Actually, it’s really high. For
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ticket (VIP) it can cost us a
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of money. I think for about £100 or over.
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for
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person. How if we count for a million person? There are
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many
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: like from the task which says that the releasing patriotic emotions in a safe way. Actually, I don’t really agree about that: like 2 weeks or 3 weeks ago, there are 2 fans of Leeds United got shots. And it makes them died. Many people come and give them flowers and
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the clothes which shown they’re sad about that. There are other sport games like
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.
Tennis
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is
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popular. In playing
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there are
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have advantages and
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.
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games shows how they against each other. The advantages are can earn a
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of money, can attract the spectators (audience). There are
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have
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of
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games,
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:
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years ago, when
Monica
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Sales
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and Steffi Graph are on the match. They play against each other
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,
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of the Steffi’s fan can’t stand anymore, he killed (shots)
Monica
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Sales
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. That makes
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have to stop the game. The people are all thinking to take her to the hospital. Because of that, it makes
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stopped from playing
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for about a
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. But now, she has started again. In my opinion, these sport can ease the international tensions and
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can make death from
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to
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become increase. So, it is very dangerous.
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The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

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  • Prediction or recommendation

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To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

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