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Both the poor and the rich find the accessibility into univerisity difficult. Do you agrre or disagree.

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To a large extent, many students have experienced various issues to get into university
education
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. Because they have to undergo various evaluation process and depends on their financial stability. I am going to discuss both merits as well as a downside in the following arguments.
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 with, several educational institutions regulate their admission process, but many countries have different
education
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 boards at an intermediate level.
For example
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, the board of examinations is like a State board, Matriculation, CBSE, and ICT. Each one these are having own standards and it varies from one another. The evaluation process
also
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 varies from these individual bodies or the combination of any two. Many students are struggling to prepare the syllabus to get into their
graduation
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graduate
 degree. It is very common whether they are rich or poor.
Secondly
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, Several
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 institutions are following some set of methods that
reservation system
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the reservation system
 for those who want
enter
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to enter
 via management quota, which lead to getting into the graduate program without any entrance exam or anticipated to appear any one of the screening processes.
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, At least 5 seats are blocked under management quota irrespective any stream of
education
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. These students may have
good financial background
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a good financial background
 or management wants to help those who are good in
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education but
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education, but
 they are
under
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below
 the poverty line,
however
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, they are expected to appear to approach exams and score average marks. In conclusion, all levels of students have given the various
exam
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exams
 to pursue their college
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 irrespective of any board of
education
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 and their wealth. They are screened various aspects like aptitude test, communication skills,
behavioral
of or relating to behavior
behavioural
 methods, subject knowledge and, etc.
these
Suggestion
These
 methods make them struggle to get into the
education
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 system.

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To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

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