You recently attended a training course for your work. Your employer has asked you for your feedback on the training course. Write a letter to your employe. In your letter • remind your employer what the course was about • explain why the course was useful to you in your work • suggest why the course may not be suitable for some of your other Colleagues
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing a letter to provide my feedback for a training
course
.
Please note that I am working in the Engineering Project Department. Last
month, I attended 5 days training program at Hotel Hayyat in order to enhance my Project Management Skills . The course
was organised by an immensely well-known international training institute named "Honey Well"
I am pleased to inform you that the training course
was extremely useful. The course
was designed in such
a way that it covered all practical and theoretical aspects. There were a number of case studies and tutorials to be completed by attendees. Moreover
, there was an exam at the end
of the course
in which the passing criteria were greater than 70 per cent. Therefore
, I am confident that this
course
will enhance my expertise in managing any large project in terms of cost-cutting.
Since the training sessions were on the technical side, I strongly believe that there was no requirement to include document controllers and data analysts. Thus
, these people can be considered for other training rather than provided one.
I hope the given feedback will be beneficial for future reference and information.
Yours faithfully,
Rob Star.Submitted by ahv on
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Try to provide a bit more detailed explanation on why certain colleagues might not benefit from the course.
coherence cohesion
Ensure each paragraph maintains a single clear idea to further improve coherence.
coherence cohesion
The letter opens and closes appropriately, with a clear greeting and sign-off.
task achievement
The tone of the letter is formal and suitable for a communication with an employer.
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The content addresses all parts of the task, including a description of the course, its benefits, and its unsuitability for some colleagues.