Many people say there is a need to protect the environment, however little effort has been made to bring these intentions to fruition. How do you feel about this situation? What action could be taken to prevent further environmental damage? Discuss this issue by giving real life examples.

Most would agree that the current state of the environment is rather grim (negative). Adding to
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problem
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is the growth of highly populated countries, whose carbon footprint is increasing at an alarming rate. It is felt that
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environmental damage could be best prevented through improvements in education and
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. Examples of both will be
analyzed
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to prove
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strategy a viable option.
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, protecting the environment begins by educating people about the
problem
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and helping them understand what they can do to help.
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, in many North American cities, people tend to use energy recklessly, often without even realizing they are acting as major contributors of environmental
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. By distributing information via television commercials and the internet, more people could be made aware of the severity of the
problem
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and told what they can do to help.
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, education is thought to play a central role in the prevention of future environmental damage. The
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preventative measure is
technology
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.
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, as its
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develops, the price of solar power is starting to compare with that of other energy resources,
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making it more economically viable. It is clear the developments in
technology
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help to reduce the price of alternative energy sources and make them it a plausible
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solution
.
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, improvements in
technology
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are closely linked with the prevention of future environmental damage. After conducting
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analysis, it is clear that developments in education and
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lie at the core of a comprehensive strategy to prevent environmental problems. It is recommended that the global family makes efforts to reduce future environmental problems via these methods.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general
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