Some companies sponsor sports as a way to advertise themselves. Some people think it is good, while others think there are disadvantages to this. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

There are spilt opinion regarding to some companies use sports as a medium of advertisement. Some people believe that it is
benefit
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beneficial
for the
company
.
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.
Whereas, another group of thinker
are
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is
against it.
However
, both
has
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have
its own pros and cons.
Therefore
, before commenting on my views, both the opinions would be discussed. There are many
advantage
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advantages
to companies
for
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in
sponsor sports as a mode of
advertsie
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advertising
advertise
adverts
themself
reflexive form of "them"
themselves
.
firstly
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Firstly
, Increasing popularity among the public. Around the world, people are
big fan
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big fans
of football and cricket sports. So,
Players
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the players
the Players
have dresses on which all the tags or logos of some companies.
Such
as shoes
of
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from
nike
(Greek mythology) winged goddess of victory; identified with Roman Victoria
Nike
,
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,
adidas
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Adidas
, reebook which is
wear
In or at or to what place
where
world class players.
Therefore
, Followers buy the shoes or clothes
.
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.
Secondly
, increasing in marketing, sales and profit. Followers buy the clothes from the advertise companies and
price
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the price
is high.
Therefore
, they produce
large profit
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large profits
a large profit
for the
company
. On the other hand
,
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,
Some people
believes
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believe
there are some disadvantages. The main disadvantage is
bettere
(comparative of 'good') superior to another (of the same class or set or kind) in excellence or quality or desirability or suitability; more highly skilled than another
better
quality. They are some companies which are far
good
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better
than the companies who sponsor sports. They have better
quality but
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quality, but
people are not aware of that. Example
kalenji
is a
shoes
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shoe
brand. Its quality is far better than other
company
's in the price range. The
sponsors
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sponsor's
sponsor
company
spend
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spends
huge amount of
many
the most common medium of exchange; functions as legal tender
money
in
advertise
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advertising
which
make
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makes
their product so costly.
Such
as
nike
(Greek mythology) winged goddess of victory; identified with Roman Victoria
Nike
,
adidas
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Adidas
and
reebook
shoes
.
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.
Thus
, In my opinion, companies sponsor sports as mode of
advertise
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advertising
themsleves
reflexive form of "them"
themselves
have advantage rather than disadvantage. But
other
plural of other; the people or things not already mentioned
others
have to make more efforts to increase the production or sales.
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