Some companies sponsor sports as a way to advertise themselves. Some people think it is good, while others think there are disadvantages to this. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

#companies #sponsor #sports #people

There are spilt opinion regarding to some companies use sports as a medium of advertisement. Some people believe that it is

benefit

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beneficial

for the

company

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Whereas, another group of thinker

are

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against it.

However

, both

has

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have

its own pros and cons.

Therefore

, before commenting on my views, both the opinions would be discussed. There are many

advantage

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advantages

to companies

for

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sponsor sports as a mode of

advertsie

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advertising

advertise

adverts

themself

reflexive form of "them"

themselves

firstly

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Firstly

, Increasing popularity among the public. Around the world, people are

big fan

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big fans

of football and cricket sports. So,

Players

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the players

the Players

have dresses on which all the tags or logos of some companies.

Such

as shoes

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from

nike

(Greek mythology) winged goddess of victory; identified with Roman Victoria

Nike

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adidas

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Adidas

, reebook which is

wear

In or at or to what place

where

world class players.

Therefore

, Followers buy the shoes or clothes

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Secondly

, increasing in marketing, sales and profit. Followers buy the clothes from the advertise companies and

price

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the price

is high.

Therefore

, they produce

large profit

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large profits

a large profit

for the

company

. On the other hand

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Some people

believes

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believe

there are some disadvantages. The main disadvantage is

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(comparative of 'good') superior to another (of the same class or set or kind) in excellence or quality or desirability or suitability; more highly skilled than another

better

quality. They are some companies which are far

good

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better

than the companies who sponsor sports. They have better

quality but

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quality, but

people are not aware of that. Example

kalenji

is a

shoes

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shoe

brand. Its quality is far better than other

company

's in the price range. The

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1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
38Grammar mistakes
 

4 paragraphs

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.5

Complete response

6.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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Topic Vocabulary:

Sports sponsorship
financial support
athletes
brand visibility
awareness
commercialization
integrity
dependencies
corporate funds
unethical practices
strategic partnerships
communal relations
promote healthy lifestyles

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Some companies sponsor sports as a way to advertise themselves. Some people think it is good, while others think there are disadvantages to this. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Fully explain your ideas

The increase in the production of consumer goods results in damage to the natural environment. What are the causes of this? What can be done to solve this problem?

some people say that in order to be happy, you must have a job you love doing. others say that other factors are more important do you think that people cần only be happy if they have a job they really enjoy

A man called Pete who is friend of friend, is planning to visit town. Write a letter to Pete. In your letter introduce yourself suggest somethings to do in your town mention one thing you would not recommend

Write a letter to a friend who will come to your country to work for 6 months. In your letter, you should: •recommend a city •suggest a few jobs that your friend could do •give some opinions about making friends with the locals.