1.B.Nowadays, people are spending increasingly large amounts of money on their marriage parties. Many people feel large and expensive weddings cause problems for the bride and groom. Do you agree? Use personal examples in your response.

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Marrying couples often aspire to throw lavish wedding receptions with which to celebrate [For Celebrating] their union.

However

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, often these parties carry with them a burden that newlyweds cannot comfortably bear. It is agreed that excessive spending on

marriage

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celebrations can cause issues for new husbands and wives.

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will be shown by

analyzing

consider in detail and subject to an analysis in order to discover essential features or meaning

analysing

how excessive matrimonial ceremonies can encumber

newlyweds

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newly weds

financially and cause unhealthy competition to show off social and financial status.

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, many marrying couples often put themselves into troubles when they spend beyond their capacity on their

marriage

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reception.

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, some friends of mine borrowed an exorbitant amount of money to pay for a very large wedding they held several years ago. Spending in

such

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a prodigal way, force these young couples to dedicate every

last

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cent of their earnings after

marriage

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to pay off their debt. As

this

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money could have been put towards building a better life for them, it is clear that problems can arise for people who spend extreme amounts on their

weddings

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wedding

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, lavish

marriage

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ceremonies

also

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give rise to the unhealthy competition of showing off social and financial status in society.

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, in India, there are some

marriage

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ceremonies where popular media celebrities

are paid

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are paying

a huge amount to participate just to show off their extravagance, which in turn influence other wealthy members of the society to do the same to maintain their status. Even

newly-wed

someone recently married

newlywed

couples reveal their competitive nature by making their ceremony more eye-

catchy

Suggestion

catching

and lavish than that of other couples.

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, prospective couples feel pressure to maintain

this

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unavoidable competitive trend in society. In conclusion, it has been proven that large and expensive wedding parties can incite issues for marrying couples.

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many

marriage

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arrangements are culturally sensitive, it is expected that modern couples weigh the pros and cons of throwing a lavish ceremony before deciding to do so.

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