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Some people say that a country should produce food locally, while others believe that it is good to import food. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give your opinion and relevant examples.

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Nowadays, a lot of countries import their
food
. People have divided views on whether nations should source
food
 locally or import it.
This
 essay will argue why it is a good idea for governments to produce their own
food
. For centuries, countries have been importing various
food
 items from other countries. Some sections of the society think
that is
 the only way to
fulfill
put in effect
fulfil
 the rising demand of certain items.
Moreover
, importing
food
 items that are not locally grown allows the people of a nation to taste and make use of them.
For instance
, India is the largest producer of sugar, but to
fulfill
put in effect
fulfil
 the needs of its ever growing population, it has to import a huge amount of sugar. These few reasons have strengthened the notion of getting products from other nations. Despite the above reasons, the idea of importing
food
 products is completely
misconstructed
interpret in the wrong way
misconstrued
. Imported
food
 items are cold stored and travel long distances,
thus
 they lose their freshness and nutrients, while locally grown produce is always fresh.
Also
, the fact that foreign items lure the modern public makes it hard for the local farmers to sell their produce and earn their livelihood, often leading them into debts or forcing them to take up other professions. A recent study done by Harvard University has shown that local produce on average is seventy percent more fresh and healthier than the imports. Overall, the concept of sourcing
food
 from other nations is completely flawed. To conclude, people have different views when it comes to
food
 being produced locally versus imported.
This
 essay argued why it is rational for countries to consume
home-grown
grown or originating in a particular place
homegrown
 products
instead
 of importing it from outside. In my opinion, imported
food
 is stale and selling it discourages the farmers of a community.
Submitted by Vaibhav on

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