The government should control the amount of violence in films and on television in order to decrease the violent crimes in society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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completely agree
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the authority
authorities
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youth
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we know that
this
is a modern and technical era and it will be increased in the predictable time
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the level of competition is boosting day by day among all countries
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new innovation and unbelievable discoveries.
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a good education system
education
system as well as intellectual
youth
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better
facilities
such
as new technical institutes, college and universities, where they can do experiments for their different study purposes.
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is providing
free
education
to the children's
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so that it is developed nation and
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the
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main reason behind
the progress of
this
country
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it is
well known fact
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a well known fact
that
youth
have
sharp memory
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a sharp memory
and they are capable to grasp extreme knowledge because they are mentally and physically
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healthier
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education
facilities would be provided by the authorities,
then
they can prove themselves as multiple knowledge. In
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money is the
first
and foremost need
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if the regularities spend 10% money on
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younger generation
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the proper education
education
of
youth
to improve their skills.
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economic level will be inclined automatically

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