It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance sports or music, and others are not. However, itvis sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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is agreed

i agreed

that a few individuals are born with certain talents

likewise

, sports and

music

, but other opponents are not holding the same ground because they think that any

child

can be taught to become perfect in an activity in which children can be indulged easily in any activity than others.

This

essay will discuss both views, before pondering upon any logical conclusion along with my hypothesis. On the one hand, the minority of people in a society are born with different talents

such

as sports or

music

because the ability to perform the task is gifted by God. To better exemplify, the pleasant voice given to the singers to express their feelings through their song like that god gifts various senses to everyone. Not only

this

, but the upbringing of a

child

also

matters with the choice of the

child

because it is a sensitive phase of life.

Consequently

, some luckiest children are there who are gifted by God.

On the other hand

, teaching curriculum activities to make a

child

good in sports and

music

hardwork

Suggestion

hard work

and practice

are

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the key to success as well as people make many efforts to develop their talent.

For example

, a famous Indian cricket player, Sachin Tendulker, cricket is his passion and makes many efforts to be a captain of Indian cricket team. These successful people motivate others to achieve their goal.

Therefore

, teaching is a good way to make a

child

perfect in one activity. In conclusion, some people are gifted with specific talent by God

since

Suggestion

from

birth, but others can be taught to become perfect in sports or

music

by their hard work. In my perspective, children can learn many things during their whole life, if a

child

want

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wants

learm

gain knowledge or skills

learn

anything.

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