A growing number of people feel that animals should not be exploited by people and that they should have the same right as humans, while others argue that humans must employ animals to satisfy their various needs, including uses for food and research. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In
this
modern world, the perspectives on how best to treat animals differ among people. While some think that animals should be treated equally as humans and have similar rights, others opine that humans use animals in terms of meeting their diverse needs
such
as food and research.
This
essay will
analyze
consider in detail and subject to an analysis in order to discover essential features or meaning
analyse
both views and provide an opinion. On the one hand, proponents of animal exploitation argue that humans are the most important earthly creatures. If ensuring the survival of the human race means experimenting on as more animals as possible,
then
this
should be done.
Example
Suggestion
An example
of
such
can be seen in various research laboratories all over the world where drug testing is
initially
done on animals before human trials are carried out. Should these
animals not
Accept comma addition
animals, not
respond positively to these experimental trials, they are not carried out on human beings.
This
example justifies the position of those who believe that humans are at liberty to choose what they do to animals.
On the other hand
, those who think animals have equal right as humans opine that animals feel pain and loss as humans do too.
This
trait has been observed in animal documentaries shown on major television channels
such
as Nat Geo Wild that these animals express signs of pain when they are hurt either by humans or fellow animals. They are even sometimes seen to mourn their loved ones who have passed on when
such
happen. These reactions are similar to what obtains in the human race when
such
occurrences happen to them. It is
thus
clear why it is thought that animals should have similar rights as humans. To conclude,
although
some people argue that using animals for food and research can be considered ethical. I believe that both animals and humans can have an enduring symbiotic relationship, which will ultimately benefit both ends. It is
thus
hoped that steps will be taken to improve the rights of animals to ensure continuity of
this
race.
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