Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

#truth #consideration #relationship #support

It is often stated that

truth speaking

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is the highest value in any

kinds

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of relationship. I agree with

this

view because being

onest

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honest

is the first positive energy that we need and when we get it from our relations, We can trust them in the first place.

Although

helping our friends should

also

be taken into account that we consider in our relationships. There is some

truth

in the argument that some people

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low level

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considerations in their relationships. Anyone's opinion can be different

with

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others.some people only

wants

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to have relations with

good looking

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persons

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or rich or

succesful

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successful

ones.

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I have a little cousin, Named Ariana. She has a low level of

confidance

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confidence

. When she

fall

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in love with her boyfriend, She didn't care that he

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a big

lier

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. She

have

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been told lies many times and she didn't care. She wanted to be

friend

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with him at any cost.

However

, I as a

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student in psychology, Believe that

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person's opinion is

same

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as mine. They believe that the most important consideration in any relationship is

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onest

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honest

all time. All the

philosephers

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philosophers

and all the educated human beings know that the

truth

is our only way of living right.

To sum up

While

it is partly true that some people may

cnsider

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consider

any other ,I would argue that telling the

truth

is the most

valueable

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valuable

thing that we can have as humans.

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Fully explain your ideas

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