Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment; only governments and large companies can make a difference. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
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society
environment
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the environment
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the at all times; all the time and on every occasion
always
hotest
issue which is the most serious problem now we have to deal with. Some used of physical heat; having a high or higher than desirable temperature or giving off heat or feeling or causing a sensation of heat or burning
hottest
peole
say that individuals can do nothing to improve the (plural) any group of human beings (men or women or children) collectively
people
environment
, only governments and large companies can make a difference. But I firmly agree that both of them have to work together to improve the environment
, not only governments and large companies can do that.
On the right hand, government and large companies have a huge effect
on the environment
. The government is the person
who have
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has
most of power and
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exforce
the law and they can punish some people who break the law, expose or make accessible to some action or influence
expose
exspeacily
in the to a distinctly greater extent or degree than is common
especially
environment
. About the some large companies, they have a lot of factories. Beacause
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Because
this
, if they do not control waste treatment closely, the environment
may be polluted by their activities.
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, individuals play an important part in protecting environment
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governments
citizens
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citizen's
awarness
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person
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cannot
effect
of pollution but
if they Accept comma addition
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together, the Suggestion
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environment
will become better gradually. Most of people in ourworld
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will have a huge effect
on enviroment
. That's even bigger than the Suggestion
the environment
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goverment
and industries' result with our the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
government
envirment
.
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although
the goverment
and industries may have a big the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
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effect
immediately, however
, making a long and last
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on
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of
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