The table displays trends concerning the amounts of fast food consumed in Melbourne. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Five Major Types of Fast Food Eaten in Melbourne (units) 2005 Present 2025 Hamburgers 40 38 51 Fried Chicken 35 37 45 Salads 5 15 41 Fried Rice 6 9 9 Noodles 6 8 9

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