The table displays trends concerning the amounts of fast food consumed in Melbourne. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Five Major Types of Fast Food Eaten in Melbourne (units) 2005Present2025 Hamburgers403851 Fried Chicken353745 Salads51541 Fried Rice699 Noodles689
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The given table describes the information about the five major fast foods that are consumed in Melbourne from the past 2005 to
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2025.
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Overall
,what stands out from the graph is that,
Hamburgers Remove the comma
apply
is
the most significant Correct subject-verb agreement
are
item
eaten by most of
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people and Noodles Correct article usage
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the least significant Correct subject-verb agreement
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Firstly
, Hamburgers is
the major type of fast food eaten in Melbourne with 40 Correct subject-verb agreement
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in the past 2005. However
it then
gradually decreased to 38 units
at present before increasing to 51 units
in the future (2025). Fried chicken is the second highest
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second-highest
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eaten in Melbourne with 37 units
at present and 45 units
after 6 years.
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salad
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item
eaten in the past with 5 units
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rose
units
after 2 decades. Moreover
, fried rice and Noodles are second
least items eaten with 6 Correct article usage
the second
units
in the past and 9 units
after 20 years.Submitted by Sravani on
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