Write a letter to your neighbor.in your letter . Describe the problem . Say how long it has been a problem . Explain what action you want the neighbor to takes Write atleast 150 words

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Uche, I am writing to draw your attention to the excessive noise that comes from your apartment.

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has become very intolerable and unpleasant, making it almost impossible for me to concentrate on my work. For 3 months now, you have stayed up almost all night playing your very loud music with utter disregard for the

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and my own health.

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has turned out to be a major issue. Your incessantly loud music

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become a sleep deprivation therapy for me and have

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landed me a place at the National Otological centre( centre for ear problems).I have complained about it severally but you have remained adamant and unrepentant about it. I urge you to do something about

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immediately. I would suggest that you reduce the volume of your sound system and put the interest of others ahead of yours.An

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line of action will be to get a

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for your accommodation.

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might cost an arm and a leg. I hope

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issue can be resolved amicably as I plan to take civil actions if

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is not addressed. Yours sincerely, Yewande

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Wed Aug 07 2019

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

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8 paragraphs

188 words

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Write a letter to your neighbor.in your letter . Describe the problem . Say how long it has been a problem . Explain what action you want the neighbor to takes Write atleast 150 words

Some people think that a huge amount of time and money is spent on the protection of wild animals and that this money could be better spent on the human population. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

In order to study at universities students are required to pay expensive tuition fees. Not all of the students can afford them so some people think that university education should be free for everyone. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

Some people believe that employment over the age of 60 is not right and creates lots of problems. So people should retire after 60 and not work. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

As a result of electronic inventions ,people do less physical activity and this is having a negative effect on their health . To what extent do you agree or disagree