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In some countries, many more people are choosing to live alone nowadays than in the past. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

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In some nations, more men and women are deciding to live by themselves these days as compared to recent years. I think
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 is a positive development because it can reduce
stress
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 as people can live freely without any restrictions and they can save their
time
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. When people living alone their actions are not restricted to the housemates and
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 can reduce the
stress
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.
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, living with someone can create conflicts between them because of the different ideas and opinions about how a house should be maintained.
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, they do not need to accommodate others and that eventually results in reducing
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stress level
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stress levels
the stress level
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, a recent survey by the Guardian suggested that people who live alone are 20% less
stress
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 than the others who live with friends. Another reason to consider is that people can save a huge amount of their
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 by living alone.
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 to say, when there are more members in
house it
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the house, it
the house it
 can take more
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 to do household work.
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 means that it can help them to save
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 by not having to wait for others to finish using appliances or equipment that they need to use.
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, a recent report by the New York Times revealed that families of four or more take an extra 20 minutes on average to get ready in the morning than a person who lives alone. In conclusion, the increasing trend of people living alone is beneficial as it can decrease the
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 level because they do not have to share accommodation with others and it can save their precious
time
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.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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