Some people believe that we cannot learn anything from the past for our life today, while others believe that history is a valuable source of information to understand human's life. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Human beings
are always remain
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are always remaining
are always remained
have always remained
curious to know about
history
because it is
only way
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the only way
to search how human
life
has progressed from past to present. But some thinkers have opposite views. Here, In
this
essay
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
will discuss both these views with my opinion. On the on hand, those who believe that learning from
past
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the past
is useless in the present
life
give some supportive views in
favor
promote over another
favour
.
First
is that
life
scenario has changed to a great extent. So, past knowledge is meaningless in Today's
life
.
For example
, To study of
13th century
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the 13th century
has no use because now we are living in
21st century
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the 21st century
and have different needs and demands that can't be fulfilled by reading of
13th century
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the 13th century
.
Secondly
, It is wise saying that we should forget to past to move forward so in
this
stiff competitive
world
, to reach to
heights
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the heights
and to grow in future the learn of
present
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the present
is in demand.
In addition
to it, There are many subjects like science and mathematics that are far more useful than
history
.
Therefore
, wasting time on
history
, it is far better to study these subjects for for future inventions and developments.
On the other hand
, I acceded
with
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to
them but
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them, but
everything has its own importance and
same thing
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the same thing
applies
on
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to
history
.
History
give us clues how
life
develops from different stages and reach to the present.
Moreover
, from
past
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the past
it can be learned which mistakes our ancestors had done and what results they had faced.
For Instance
,
world
war
first
and
world
war
second
. The knowledge of the reasons of these wars can be useful to avoid to
third
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a third world war
world
war. Nobody can forget the destruction caused by atom bombs
.
Accept space
.
It is massage for
this
generation how
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generation, how
dangerous can be the use of
atom
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atomic
bombs. In the conclusion, Though people believe that learning past has no use in the today'
s
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life, but
life
but w
e ca
can not
can't
nt not neglect the benefits of past
history
because it only way to know how we reac
h
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at
in present
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