Some say that sports play an important role in society. Others, however, think that it is nothing more than a leisure activity. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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Sports are very associated
to
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with
entertenment
an activity that is diverting and that holds the attention
entertainment
, and
in addition
, is relevant to general health and well-being. Some can see
sport
as a hobby or leisure,
although
it can be a career plan for many.
On
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In
my point of view, I considerate
sport
as a way to connect people and transform bad behaviours into good
life-style
a manner of living that reflects the person's values and attitudes
lifestyle
. In
this
essay, it will be discussed both opinions.
Firstly
, there are many benefits in doing
sport
,
for example
, improvement of health
,
Accept space
,
self
estime
the condition of being honored (esteemed or respected or well regarded)
esteem
, and body disposition.
Also
, it can increase the quality of
spleep
a natural and periodic state of rest during which consciousness of the world is suspended
sleep
and work. It is important to cite that exercise practice make people
more happy
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happier
, and due to
this
fact, the chances to have a good social relationship is higher, as the chance to meet and reunite more friends.
Sport
is a part of our culture, and it has a universal language, so everybody can understand a game just listening or seeing by tv or radio. Many
wants
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want
to follow a professional career,
besides
the huge pre-concept
inside
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in
our society. It is clear that a small number of people
acctually
in actual fact
actually
achieve their goal
in
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to
become a professional soccer or tennis player,
for example
. But,
this
fact cannot be
a
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an
excuse to considerate it a leisure activity. Parents usually
incentivate
a positive motivational influence
incentive
children
to play
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play
their
favorite
something regarded with special favor or liking
favourite
sport
, and
in contrast
, they want them to follow
a
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an
academic
jorney
the act of traveling from one place to another
journey
journeys
going to university.
Secondly
, it is normal to see people
refering
make reference to
referring
sport
as
a
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an
easy way to gain money without study and work hard, and it
reforce
make reference to
refers
a wrong idea of
sport
as a not serious field. In conclusion,
sport
is
a
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an
important part of our world culture, and we can see
this
practice
since
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for
thousands of years.
However
, it needs to break some concepts and
barries
a structure or object that impedes free movement
barriers
berries
.
Also
, government funding should be more focus on
sport
iniciatives
readiness to embark on bold new ventures
initiatives
initiative
and competition, especially for population with
lowest levels
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the lowest levels
of education and progress.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • social fabric
  • fostering
  • community spirit
  • health and wellness
  • national pride
  • leisure activity
  • entertainment
  • unwind
  • economic impact
  • generating jobs
  • boosting tourism
  • stimulating local economies
  • negative aspects
  • risk of injuries
  • pressure on young athletes
  • doping
  • corruption
  • essential societal component
  • responsible management
  • promoting
  • significant
  • merely
  • contributing
  • progress
  • acknowledging
  • value
  • emphasizing
  • balance
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