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Some people think that all teenagers should be required to do unpaid work in their free time to help the local community. They believe this would benefit both the individual teenager and society as a whole. Do you agree or disagree?

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It is sometimes argued that younger adults should participate in volunteering because it may prove beneficial for
society
. While
society
 emphasizes to volunteer
wor
activity directed toward making or doing something
work
, but I believe that
this
 can either help
society
 or individual. There are various reasons why
society
 should not force young people to take part in unpaid activities.
Firstly
, students always find themselves busy with homework and exam revisions; even sometimes it seems like
full time job
Suggestion
a full time job
 as their school schedule follows tuition.
For example
, in India, school children stay from 9 am to 3 pm in schools, and after the visit
,
Accept space
,
 tuition to cover up their homework, which is quite hectic.
Secondly
, they do not have enough time to spend with family, relatives, and friends and that their childhood should be meant to more playful, stress- free and full of leisure activities. Despite that,
society
 still, believes in getting unpaid work done through poor children who do not have time for themselves.
On the other hand
, volunteering is helpful to develop excellent characteristics in a person, and
also
 useful to get a job in the future.
Although
 there are good reasons to do free work,
society
can not
can not
cannot
bide
make by combining materials and parts
build
 rules or push youngsters to participate. If
society
 takes
actions
Suggestion
action
 to increase unpaid
work
Suggestion
worker
 involvement,
this
 will not benefit them; perhaps it can affect severely on their reputation. It can be assumed that young people might choose social welfare or social services after their studies completed.
As a result
, individuals should be given choices because they could feel pressurized, which can lead to suicidal mental eagerness. In conclusion, the community could benefit from volunteering if youngsters show willingness for involvement in the social activities
instead
 of
push
Suggestion
a push
 over by people.

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