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In some countries, younger people are neglecting their right to vote. What problems does this cause and what are some of the possible solutions?

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Younger generations in some nations are avoiding their right to vote. The main
problem
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 causes is that leaders cannot address the issues of young people and the most viable solution is for the
government
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 to sponsor awareness campaigns in
media
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the media
 and colleges. The primary
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 of
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 trend is that politicians cannot solve the problems of young people.
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, leaders are not aware of what younger individuals want from them because they have not given their opinion.
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, their issue can unheard and they will think about the public who have given their contribution to elections.
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, according to a report published by
BBC
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the BBC
 in the year 2016, 40% of young people have not given their votes in general elections.
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, the
government
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 stops addressing young generations for their issues. A possible solution to
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 predicament is that the authorities should educate younger individuals about their rights through organizing campaigns in universities.
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 to say that the
government
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 could shed some light on
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 situation
to
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for
 aware youth about the consequences of not giving their vote.
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, they will understand how important is to give an opinion for their betterment and the
government
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 can make laws that will be beneficial for their future.
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, a similar initiative implemented in Ireland and
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 resulted in a 30% increase in the number of young people who cast their votes in
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last elections
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the last elections
. In conclusion, young people are not giving their votes in few countries and the
problem
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 of
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 approach is that Politicians do not give importance to their issues and to solve
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problem
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 the
government
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 should arrange campaigns to aware youth of the importance of the vote.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • democratic process
  • political instability
  • skewed representation
  • governance
  • erosion
  • civic education
  • alienation
  • policy-making
  • accessible
  • incentives
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