Some people believe that the qualities a person needs to become successful in today’s world cannot be learned at a university or similar academic institution. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There was an ignited debate in recent years to argue for the importance of educational setting. Opponents to orthodox perspective did believe that the qualities that could pave the way for success were collected from other environments rather than traditional
education
. In my humble opinion,
university
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the university
does partly contribute
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has partly contributed
to one’s sweet fruits, other required abilities come down from real-life practices. On the one hand, current
education
systems are in desperate need of being reformed. Despite that fact that the concept that learning is the shortcut to eradicate the gap of the circumstances which one was born was accepted for generations, our
education
system is way behind on realistic expectations. Only by tackling at the root of imparting
knowledge
can human lay
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can human lie
can human lay
a new foundation for the
next
graduates who are obliged to face an endless sea of deadly issues that could threat our survival.
For example
, more and more universities have included computer science and soft skills in their curriculums no matter what
student's
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the student's
major is.
This
move could be admitted as
education
’s failure amid changing realistic expectations in current context. In
this
light, the
skeptics
someone who habitually doubts accepted beliefs
sceptics
have the rights to declare that higher
education
does no longer catch the pace of time.
On the other hand
, learning must be practiced throughout one’s lifetime rather than only in schooling. In fact, learning does not make one learned, or
in other words
, to be successful. There are those who have
knowledge
and those who have understanding. The
first
requires memory and the
second
philosophy.
Therefore
, a person
have
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has
to be armed with a comprehensive understanding that it is the combination of practical experiences and
knowledge
schooled in educational settings to be the best way leading to the final success.
For instance
, Edmond Dantes in the Count of Monte Cristo who actually had enjoyed
two-year
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a two - year
of training with an Italian priest, Faria, did learn other important abilities by experiencing various lives to eventually reach his most precious success: to forgive the life and to forgive himself
also
. For learning is a relentless quest, each individual is obliged to cultivate practical qualities that aims to support his goals
everyday
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every day
in life, even as the schooling was over,
instead
of depending on the
knowledge
learned in school. In conclusion, there is a widening gap between higher
education
and
realistic expectation
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a realistic expectation
that forces the authority to pay attention. I firmly believe that humans today do no longer depend on the
knowledge
impacted by universities to become successful.
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