Recent research has confirmed that human activity has become the greatest threat to plant and animal life Why do you think this has happened? How can we reduce our impact on the natural world?

In the recent research,
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the thing named or in question
it
has been proved that human activities
creates
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create
major problems to plant and animal life.
This
essay will
first
suggest that one of the
problem
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problems
caused by people was construction of industries in
forest
area and amend regulation
law
as the most viable solution
.
Accept space
.
The essay
further
discusses the problems and solutions associated with that. The foremost problem caused by industrialisation leads to deforestation
(
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cutting of trees and air pollution). Most of the animals in
forest
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the forest
a forest
depends
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depend
on fruits and water for
theirlivelihood
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their livelihood
and shelter purpose.
For Example
, In the India, The biggest Sahara
forest
in which around
thoushand
the cardinal number that is the product of 10 and 100
thousands
thousand
of animals and
nationa
of or relating to or belonging to a nation or country
national
animal are lived, now due to constructing industries and export of wood to foreign countries increasing which largely disturbed the
animals
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animal's
lifecycle
. Some Industries built
theres
belonging to them
theirs
theories
Theresa
created water
pollution
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pollution, thus
thus
in turn animals drink polluted water and numbers are
decreased
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decreasing
rapidly. Currently, only
few animals
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a few animals
are there currently. A possible solution to
this
problem would be to amend
forest preservance
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the forest preservance law
law
. The
law
should creates
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should create
regulation in constructing industries, factories, homes
in
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with
animals living dense area.
Also
, creating awareness to
common people
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the common people
about the importance of animals and plants for human survival. Introducing awareness programs
helps
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help
to understand humans about deforestation drawbacks. To conclude, Cutting the
forest
tress
a tall perennial woody plant having a main trunk and branches forming a distinct elevated crown; includes both gymnosperms and angiosperms
trees
by peoples for introducing new factories and industries makes animal livelihood
to
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in
danger.
Hence
, Amendment of
law
helps to overcome
this
which was implemented successfully in other developed countries.

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